Post by Mirela Rahela on Feb 7, 2007 0:05:43 GMT -5
Character History
Full Name: Mirela Lucia Rahela
Age: 17 years
DOB: 08/18/1868
Nationality: European/Romanian
Origin: Romania
Gender: Female
Family: Mother and sister still in Romania
Occupation: Mutated Person
History: Aurelia left Romania at sixteen to find a job. Her sister was sick, and her mother's job paid very little, so it rested on her shoulders to send back money for them.
She travelled to Paris, thinking it was the land full of oppourtunities, and alreading being fluent in the French language. When she got there, she fell in love with the city, and it's beauty. She still loved Romania, her homeland, but Paris enticed her with promises of happiness and excitement.
After only a few months of being in Paris, she saw a great oppourtunity. An offer to undergo some experimentation for money! She immediately signed up, but it didn't exactly go as she expected...
She found that her eyesight was much better than usual, though her hearing wasn't exactly at it's best. After a day or two, she discovered something even stranger; she was growing a tail! She didn't know what to do, and she panicked, refusing to leave her small, shabby apartment for anything.
After a week, her ears became furry, and triangular, positioned near the top of her head. Her eyes turned green, and her hair a rusty red-orange color. Her hearing stopped getting worse, but it got no better.
Eventually, she found a way of hiding her 'condition' from the public, by wearing gowns with ruffled skirts so her tail was not visible; and by wearing hats to hide her ears. For a year she lived this way, ever on the lookout for one of the scientists who had experimented on her so she could beg to be changed back.
Appearance
Picture: Couldn't find one, sorry!
Height: about 5'2"
Weight: Around 90-100
Hair: It used to be dark brown, now it is reddish orange, it's about four inches long, six at the longest, and straight.
Eyes: Her eyes used to be brown, now they are green. Almond shaped and a little larger than normal.
Appearance/Clothing: She usually wears a plain white dress with long, belled sleeves and a medium-cut neckline. Other times she'll be seen wearing a plain, house dress, a simple gray with no distinguishing features.
Distinguishing Marks: She has a pale scar on her neck, almost in the shape of a crescent, that she recieved when she was very young and hurt herself falling from a tree.
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For the Paid Experiments:
Mutation: Red-orange furry ears and fox tail.
Description: She has good eyesight, but she still can't see in the complete dark, only if there is some source of light. Her eyesight is useless, however, in bright light. Her hearing isn't very good, and she often has to ask people to speak louder.
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Personality:
Description: Aurelia is outgoing and bright, but prefers not to make new friends. She likes talking to many people, even though she might not trust them or like them, and is very bold. She is loyal to Romania, despite her love of France, and she is deathly devoted to her family.
She tries to be kind, but sometimes her mouth can get the best of her. Aurelia's worst problem is saying what she thinks, though it does help her sometimes. She loves telling stories, and adores books, glad that she no longer has to sneak them into her house, as she did in Romania. Reading was frowned upon with girls, especially with her, when she was supposed to be doing housework and cleaning in her sister's stead.
Weaknesses: Her greatest weakness is her constant need to hide her 'mutations' and her wayward mouth and brash opinions. Bad hearing.
Strengths: She has good eyesight.
Rping
Synopsis: It's about Aurelia, and it's a sample pf how I would RP her now.
Rules:
1. Must be at least four paragraphs. Five sentences each. How many words doesn't matter.
2. Use correct grammar and puncuation. Mispelling doesn't count, but too much bad grammar won't let you get accepted.
3. This counts as a major way of determing whether or not you are good for a certain part. We want your rping to be as well as your character.
Sample Rp: Aurelia gazed into her empty cupboards, (I wasn't exactly sure if they really had cupboards...) "Great..." she muttered, slamming the door shut. She dragged herself into her small room and looked at her pathetic pile of clothes in the middle of the floor. The pile looked so small... She picked up a white dress and pulled it on, making sure her tail was covered securely and not sticking out anywhere.
Finding a matching white sun hat and pulling it on over her ears, she headed for the door. She paused only to slip on some uncomfortable, cheap shoes she had bought only out of necessity. Locking her door behind her, she stepped out into the warm air, scowling. She shook some of her hair out of her face and started walking towards the market.
When she arrived, she picked up a large bag of rice and a basket full of vegetables. She payed the person at the stall and set off home, a scowl still firmly on her face. After only a few feet, her shoe got caught on a stone and she fell. Her vegetables flew everywhere and the rice bag broke open at the corner, sending the large grains onto the street. She cursed in a very unladylike way, eliciting titters and glares from the people nearby, who didn't even bother to help her up.
She got to her feet wearily, brushing her bloodied hands on the skirt of her dress and muttering to herself furiously. She looked around for her vegetables, but they were already gone, taken by street kids who were desperate for food. She sighed and closed her eyes, "Lord, give me strength..." she murmured, pressing a hand to her chest.
She picked up what she could of the rice and stuffed it in the bag. She hefted it carefully, making sure the hole was facing the sky, and started off for home. As she arrived, she dropped the rice on the rickety dinner table and retreated to her room. She flung herself on her bed and draped an arm across her eyes. She hastily drew a cross on her chest and breathed a quick prayer before falling into sleep.
((I know the RP sample isn't too great, but I was having a bit of writer's block... sorry!))
-Admin edit-
Accepted by Damon Walker
Full Name: Mirela Lucia Rahela
Age: 17 years
DOB: 08/18/1868
Nationality: European/Romanian
Origin: Romania
Gender: Female
Family: Mother and sister still in Romania
Occupation: Mutated Person
History: Aurelia left Romania at sixteen to find a job. Her sister was sick, and her mother's job paid very little, so it rested on her shoulders to send back money for them.
She travelled to Paris, thinking it was the land full of oppourtunities, and alreading being fluent in the French language. When she got there, she fell in love with the city, and it's beauty. She still loved Romania, her homeland, but Paris enticed her with promises of happiness and excitement.
After only a few months of being in Paris, she saw a great oppourtunity. An offer to undergo some experimentation for money! She immediately signed up, but it didn't exactly go as she expected...
She found that her eyesight was much better than usual, though her hearing wasn't exactly at it's best. After a day or two, she discovered something even stranger; she was growing a tail! She didn't know what to do, and she panicked, refusing to leave her small, shabby apartment for anything.
After a week, her ears became furry, and triangular, positioned near the top of her head. Her eyes turned green, and her hair a rusty red-orange color. Her hearing stopped getting worse, but it got no better.
Eventually, she found a way of hiding her 'condition' from the public, by wearing gowns with ruffled skirts so her tail was not visible; and by wearing hats to hide her ears. For a year she lived this way, ever on the lookout for one of the scientists who had experimented on her so she could beg to be changed back.
Appearance
Picture: Couldn't find one, sorry!
Height: about 5'2"
Weight: Around 90-100
Hair: It used to be dark brown, now it is reddish orange, it's about four inches long, six at the longest, and straight.
Eyes: Her eyes used to be brown, now they are green. Almond shaped and a little larger than normal.
Appearance/Clothing: She usually wears a plain white dress with long, belled sleeves and a medium-cut neckline. Other times she'll be seen wearing a plain, house dress, a simple gray with no distinguishing features.
Distinguishing Marks: She has a pale scar on her neck, almost in the shape of a crescent, that she recieved when she was very young and hurt herself falling from a tree.
---
For the Paid Experiments:
Mutation: Red-orange furry ears and fox tail.
Description: She has good eyesight, but she still can't see in the complete dark, only if there is some source of light. Her eyesight is useless, however, in bright light. Her hearing isn't very good, and she often has to ask people to speak louder.
---
Personality:
Description: Aurelia is outgoing and bright, but prefers not to make new friends. She likes talking to many people, even though she might not trust them or like them, and is very bold. She is loyal to Romania, despite her love of France, and she is deathly devoted to her family.
She tries to be kind, but sometimes her mouth can get the best of her. Aurelia's worst problem is saying what she thinks, though it does help her sometimes. She loves telling stories, and adores books, glad that she no longer has to sneak them into her house, as she did in Romania. Reading was frowned upon with girls, especially with her, when she was supposed to be doing housework and cleaning in her sister's stead.
Weaknesses: Her greatest weakness is her constant need to hide her 'mutations' and her wayward mouth and brash opinions. Bad hearing.
Strengths: She has good eyesight.
Rping
Synopsis: It's about Aurelia, and it's a sample pf how I would RP her now.
Rules:
1. Must be at least four paragraphs. Five sentences each. How many words doesn't matter.
2. Use correct grammar and puncuation. Mispelling doesn't count, but too much bad grammar won't let you get accepted.
3. This counts as a major way of determing whether or not you are good for a certain part. We want your rping to be as well as your character.
Sample Rp: Aurelia gazed into her empty cupboards, (I wasn't exactly sure if they really had cupboards...) "Great..." she muttered, slamming the door shut. She dragged herself into her small room and looked at her pathetic pile of clothes in the middle of the floor. The pile looked so small... She picked up a white dress and pulled it on, making sure her tail was covered securely and not sticking out anywhere.
Finding a matching white sun hat and pulling it on over her ears, she headed for the door. She paused only to slip on some uncomfortable, cheap shoes she had bought only out of necessity. Locking her door behind her, she stepped out into the warm air, scowling. She shook some of her hair out of her face and started walking towards the market.
When she arrived, she picked up a large bag of rice and a basket full of vegetables. She payed the person at the stall and set off home, a scowl still firmly on her face. After only a few feet, her shoe got caught on a stone and she fell. Her vegetables flew everywhere and the rice bag broke open at the corner, sending the large grains onto the street. She cursed in a very unladylike way, eliciting titters and glares from the people nearby, who didn't even bother to help her up.
She got to her feet wearily, brushing her bloodied hands on the skirt of her dress and muttering to herself furiously. She looked around for her vegetables, but they were already gone, taken by street kids who were desperate for food. She sighed and closed her eyes, "Lord, give me strength..." she murmured, pressing a hand to her chest.
She picked up what she could of the rice and stuffed it in the bag. She hefted it carefully, making sure the hole was facing the sky, and started off for home. As she arrived, she dropped the rice on the rickety dinner table and retreated to her room. She flung herself on her bed and draped an arm across her eyes. She hastily drew a cross on her chest and breathed a quick prayer before falling into sleep.
((I know the RP sample isn't too great, but I was having a bit of writer's block... sorry!))
-Admin edit-
Accepted by Damon Walker